Teen Review
When You Were Here
Daisy Whitney
Pub 6-2013, Little, Brown Books for Young Readers
Love and loss are two of the most powerful experiences the human soul can have. One is filled with joy and awakening, the other with sorrow and longing. Yet they often go hand-in-hand: One brings pain, and the other healing. This is the overarching theme of Daisy Whitney’s When You Were Here, the story of a young man trying to find closure after his mother’s death. He manages to find love in ways that bring unexpected healing.
Two months before his graduation, Danny Kellerman’s mother lost her battle with cancer. After losing his father six years before, and his adopted sister more or less deserting his family, Danny really doesn’t think he can take much more. Searching for solace, he flies to his family’s old apartment in Tokyo. There, he meets Kana, a girl with whom he forms an unlikely friendship. While dealing with his mother’s death, Danny also trying to figure out why Holland, his childhood companion and onetime girlfriend, has been acting distant. During his time in Tokyo, Danny discovers that his mother had found a method of healing that may not have saved her life, but did provide comfort for her soul.
Love is the driving force in When You Were Here, and appears in many different forms. There is the love that existed between Danny and his mother: the unconditional, ever-present kind only found between a parent and a child. There is the love between Danny and Kana: not romantic, but a strong brother-sister bond that forms after only a few weeks. And there is the love between Danny and Holland: one which proves that, even in the face of tragedy and distance, when two people are meant to be together, they will find a way. The forms love assumes in this story enable Danny to find healing and hope.
As a person who has never experienced the loss of a parent, I can’t say with a hundred percent authority that this book tackles grief in an authentic way.
However, what I have witnessed in the lives of others leads me to believe that this is an honest, very well-written account of the grieving process. At the beginning, Danny is angry and confused, but by the end he has reached a point of closure and assurance. Yes, he has gone through a horrible experience, but healing is possible. His development as a character is without flaw; Danny changes from a person who can’t see what good can come from tragedy, to someone who is ready to move forward.
Brilliantly executing the difficult themes of love and death, Daisy Whitney has created a story that tells the truth about grief: It is difficult to endure, but there is always a way to move on. If death is the cut, then love is the balm that heals the wounds Danny has incurred. 
- Rachel P., 17

Teen Review

When You Were Here

Daisy Whitney

Pub 6-2013, Little, Brown Books for Young Readers

Love and loss are two of the most powerful experiences the human soul can have. One is filled with joy and awakening, the other with sorrow and longing. Yet they often go hand-in-hand: One brings pain, and the other healing. This is the overarching theme of Daisy Whitney’s When You Were Here, the story of a young man trying to find closure after his mother’s death. He manages to find love in ways that bring unexpected healing.

Two months before his graduation, Danny Kellerman’s mother lost her battle with cancer. After losing his father six years before, and his adopted sister more or less deserting his family, Danny really doesn’t think he can take much more. Searching for solace, he flies to his family’s old apartment in Tokyo. There, he meets Kana, a girl with whom he forms an unlikely friendship. While dealing with his mother’s death, Danny also trying to figure out why Holland, his childhood companion and onetime girlfriend, has been acting distant. During his time in Tokyo, Danny discovers that his mother had found a method of healing that may not have saved her life, but did provide comfort for her soul.

Love is the driving force in When You Were Here, and appears in many different forms. There is the love that existed between Danny and his mother: the unconditional, ever-present kind only found between a parent and a child. There is the love between Danny and Kana: not romantic, but a strong brother-sister bond that forms after only a few weeks. And there is the love between Danny and Holland: one which proves that, even in the face of tragedy and distance, when two people are meant to be together, they will find a way. The forms love assumes in this story enable Danny to find healing and hope.

As a person who has never experienced the loss of a parent, I can’t say with a hundred percent authority that this book tackles grief in an authentic way.

However, what I have witnessed in the lives of others leads me to believe that this is an honest, very well-written account of the grieving process. At the beginning, Danny is angry and confused, but by the end he has reached a point of closure and assurance. Yes, he has gone through a horrible experience, but healing is possible. His development as a character is without flaw; Danny changes from a person who can’t see what good can come from tragedy, to someone who is ready to move forward.

Brilliantly executing the difficult themes of love and death, Daisy Whitney has created a story that tells the truth about grief: It is difficult to endure, but there is always a way to move on. If death is the cut, then love is the balm that heals the wounds Danny has incurred.

- Rachel P., 17

Teen Review
Kiss Me Again
Rachel Vail
Pub 12-2012, HarperTeen

He closed the distance I’d opened up between us and kissed me lightly on the lips. “Maybe we can just be,” Kevin whispered.

Rachel Vail is the author of over sixteen young adult novels and countless other books for children. Her latest novel, Kiss Me Again, the sequel to If We Kiss, is a contemporary teen story that pushes boundaries both romantic and familial. This isn’t a story that you hear all the time, but it  found a way into my heart with its twists and turns.
Kiss Me Again picks up where If We Kiss ended. Charlie Collins explains how much has changed since last year: Her mother is now married to the father of her crush, Kevin Lazarus, so Kevin is now her stepbrother. Charlie is making all kinds of mistakes — especially with her best friend, whose trust she has to earn back after dating Kevin when Tess was dating him. To make things more odd, Charlie and Kevin are still in love, but their parents don’t know about it.
 
Vail uses this scenario to show how complicated romance can be for  teenagers. Charlie and Kevin have to live under the same roof, and they don’t want to upset the balance. Maybe it’s better sometimes for parents not to know things! But keeping things from parents can also make them more difficult. Because, even though their love is so complicated, Charlie and Kevin aren’t willing to let it go. 
 
When, in If We Kiss, Tess noticed Charlie and Kevin together all the time, she wasn’t happy about it. But even though Charlie didn’t want to hurt her friends’ feelings, she realized she couldn’t make everyone happy. She was faced with a very difficult choice: What did she want the most? She learned that her real friends would stick around despite her choice of boyfriend, even if they weren’t as close as they were before. 
 
Charlie is faced with a similar problem in Kiss Me Again: What does she want most? Does she want to be with Kevin or does she want to keep the peace at home? If she’s with Kevin, their parents will find out and they might break up. Charlie couldn’t live with the guilt. At the same time, she and Kevin can’t keep their love a secret forever. What will Charlie do? 
 
Like my favorite  love stories, this one has a happy ending. We don’t find out what happens with Charlie and Kevin, suggesting that there may be a third book (hopefully!) in the series. But Kiss Me Again shows us how to forgive and just love what we have for the moment. It also leaves curiosity in the reader’s  head with the last chapter. Kiss Me Again is a great book for all teens still learning about the ins and outs of romance.
 
- Nisi S., 17
 

Teen Review

Kiss Me Again

Rachel Vail

Pub 12-2012, HarperTeen

He closed the distance I’d opened up between us and kissed me lightly on the lips. “Maybe we can just be,” Kevin whispered.

Rachel Vail is the author of over sixteen young adult novels and countless other books for children. Her latest novel, Kiss Me Again, the sequel to If We Kiss, is a contemporary teen story that pushes boundaries both romantic and familial. This isn’t a story that you hear all the time, but it  found a way into my heart with its twists and turns.

Kiss Me Again picks up where If We Kiss ended. Charlie Collins explains how much has changed since last year: Her mother is now married to the father of her crush, Kevin Lazarus, so Kevin is now her stepbrother. Charlie is making all kinds of mistakes — especially with her best friend, whose trust she has to earn back after dating Kevin when Tess was dating him. To make things more odd, Charlie and Kevin are still in love, but their parents don’t know about it.

 

Vail uses this scenario to show how complicated romance can be for  teenagers. Charlie and Kevin have to live under the same roof, and they don’t want to upset the balance. Maybe it’s better sometimes for parents not to know things! But keeping things from parents can also make them more difficult. Because, even though their love is so complicated, Charlie and Kevin aren’t willing to let it go.

 

When, in If We Kiss, Tess noticed Charlie and Kevin together all the time, she wasn’t happy about it. But even though Charlie didn’t want to hurt her friends’ feelings, she realized she couldn’t make everyone happy. She was faced with a very difficult choice: What did she want the most? She learned that her real friends would stick around despite her choice of boyfriend, even if they weren’t as close as they were before.

 

Charlie is faced with a similar problem in Kiss Me Again: What does she want most? Does she want to be with Kevin or does she want to keep the peace at home? If she’s with Kevin, their parents will find out and they might break up. Charlie couldn’t live with the guilt. At the same time, she and Kevin can’t keep their love a secret forever. What will Charlie do?

 

Like my favorite  love stories, this one has a happy ending. We don’t find out what happens with Charlie and Kevin, suggesting that there may be a third book (hopefully!) in the series. But Kiss Me Again shows us how to forgive and just love what we have for the moment. It also leaves curiosity in the reader’s  head with the last chapter. Kiss Me Again is a great book for all teens still learning about the ins and outs of romance.

 

- Nisi S., 17

 

Upcoming Young Adult Author Events

We had a great time participating in the NYC Teen Author Festival this past weekend: 

 

Clockwise from top back: A.S. King, Diana Peterfreund, Michael Northrop, David Levithan, Sharon Cameron, Victoria Schwab, Nova Ren Suma. 

Thanks to everyone who came out! And thanks to Michael Northrop for wearing that sweet Huey Lewis and the News tshirt. Made my night. 

Our April YA events are detailed below- hope to see you there!

April 16Gayle Forman in conversation with publisher Julie Strauss-Gabel 

 

April 28YA Author panel, hosted by David Levithan. Featuring:

        - Jennifer E Smith 

        - Elizabeth Eulberg 

        - Caela Carter

        - Barry Lyga 

        - Lindsay Ribar

        - Jessica Verdi 

  

See you tonight!

See you tonight!

Teen Review
Crash: Visions Book 1
Lisa McMann
Pub 1-2013, Simon Pulse
Crash: Visions Book 1 by Lisa McMann is a modern-day retelling of Romeo and Juliet, but with an unexpected twist: Jules (Juliet) has visions of death. Jules eats, breathes, and smells like pizza twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week because she lives above a pizzeria that happens to be owned by her parents. In her free time, she makes pizza, works in the pizzeria, and hears about how poorly they are doing compared to the Angottis, the rival pizzeria-owning family. Sawyer Angotti, son of Mr. Angotti, is Jules’s age, and Jules has loved him ever since they were young. As if this weren’t complicated enough, recently, Jules’s visions have become more frequent. It’s always the same: a truck, a building, and nine body bags. Her love for Sawyer Agnotti and their family feud is the least of her worries.The characters in Crash are realistic and resemble teenagers in today’s society. Jules, a typical working teenager, is usually quiet in school and around others. She might seem like an uninteresting, dull character, but her hilarious thoughts set her apart. After he dropped a pizza accidently, she becomes furious at the other delivery boy because he did not have a broken “wenus.” To accept any situation, Jules uses her humorous personality, no matter how severe the situation may be. For example, after being injured, she says “What do I look like?” Lisa McMann’s description and writing style unites the characters and readers.Even though the characters and plot hold the story together, it takes time to progress. Jules remains concerned with an idea for extensive amount of time and will speak only in monologue, which at times becomes tedious. I found myself conflicted about whether or not to leave the book or continue to read. This is a situation that a reader should not be placed in. However, McCann does redeem herself by placing unexpected events between these long, tedious monologues.Overall, Crash is a novel that unites complex characters with unexpected plot events to captivate the reader. The story begins with a typical girl working in a typical pizzeria. But, the reader soon finds out that Jules is far from normal. Overall, it is a suspenseful tale and honestly should be continued.
- Rima I., 17

Teen Review

Crash: Visions Book 1

Lisa McMann

Pub 1-2013, Simon Pulse

Crash: Visions Book 1 by Lisa McMann is a modern-day retelling of Romeo and Juliet, but with an unexpected twist: Jules (Juliet) has visions of death. Jules eats, breathes, and smells like pizza twenty-four hours a day, seven days a week because she lives above a pizzeria that happens to be owned by her parents. In her free time, she makes pizza, works in the pizzeria, and hears about how poorly they are doing compared to the Angottis, the rival pizzeria-owning family. Sawyer Angotti, son of Mr. Angotti, is Jules’s age, and Jules has loved him ever since they were young.

As if this weren’t complicated enough, recently, Jules’s visions have become more frequent. It’s always the same: a truck, a building, and nine body bags. Her love for Sawyer Agnotti and their family feud is the least of her worries.

The characters in Crash are realistic and resemble teenagers in today’s society. Jules, a typical working teenager, is usually quiet in school and around others. She might seem like an uninteresting, dull character, but her hilarious thoughts set her apart. After he dropped a pizza accidently, she becomes furious at the other delivery boy because he did not have a broken “wenus.” To accept any situation, Jules uses her humorous personality, no matter how severe the situation may be. For example, after being injured, she says “What do I look like?” Lisa McMann’s description and writing style unites the characters and readers.

Even though the characters and plot hold the story together, it takes time to progress. Jules remains concerned with an idea for extensive amount of time and will speak only in monologue, which at times becomes tedious. I found myself conflicted about whether or not to leave the book or continue to read. This is a situation that a reader should not be placed in. However, McCann does redeem herself by placing unexpected events between these long, tedious monologues.

Overall, Crash is a novel that unites complex characters with unexpected plot events to captivate the reader. The story begins with a typical girl working in a typical pizzeria. But, the reader soon finds out that Jules is far from normal. Overall, it is a suspenseful tale and honestly should be continued.

- Rima I., 17

March 23rd, 7pm: NYC Teen Reads Festival YA Author Panel

Our NYC Teen Reads Festival author lineup is bananas awesome:

AS King, Diana Peterfreund, Nova Ren Suma, Sharon Cameron, Michael Northrop and Victoria Schwab, hosted by David Levithan. See you all on 3/23!

Teen Review
The Madman’s Daughter
Megan Shepherd
Pub 1-2013, Balzer + Bray
Madness is defined as the state of being mentally disturbed, insane or demented — in other words, outside the norm. Yet most of us have, at least once in our lives, come close to the beauty and curiosity of madness. Like Juliet Moreau, The Madman’s Daughter’s enticing protagonist, we desire access to the delirious world of our subconscious — what lives within us but is so hard to reach from  the humdrum world of logic and morals. Throwing ourselves headlong  into the drone of everyday habits and schedules, we slowly become victims of conformity. Sometimes, we have to dream of breaking free from these unbearable chains, of doing the opposite of what is expected. The Madman’s Daughter is Megan Shepherd’s first novel, so it’s understandable that she’d want to find her place in the world of young adult books. She does so incredibly well. The Madman’s Daughter uses its historical references to place it in parallel to modern-day society as well as bring into focus the very specific, and distinct, topic of science’s relationship to spirituality. The Madman’s Daughter recounts the tale of The Island of Dr. Moreau by H.G.Wells through the eyes of Dr. Moreau’s sixteen-year-old daughter, Juliet Moreau. A presumed orphan who finds herself in the slums of 19th century London, Juliet has been the victim of a scandalous story about her father’s science experiments. Left without a job or money, she runs into a childhood friend named Montgomery who then leads her to her father’s island. Once on the island, she is torn between rejoicing at the long-awaited reunion with her father and recoiling at the gruesome truth of his scientific experiments. Juliet finds herself in a difficult situation wherein she has only just reunited with her family and must either decide to stay with her father or return to London, a victim once again. Love and hate, science and lust, survival and the spirit all define Juliet Moreau’s journey to the unconscious. Overall, Sheperd’s tale is a delight to read. The reader is instantly captivated by the gloomy, curious character of Juliet, and her distress in the face of truth. Shepherd delves deep into Juliet’s mind to mine the source of her desperation. Of course, the “madman” himself is very fickle and shifty. Like Shylock in The Merchant of Venice, Inspector Javert in Les Miserables, or even Fagin in Oliver Twist, Dr. Moreau is a character that defies pigeonholing. These are, personally, my favorite characters: those who confound “good” and “bad”. Readers want to place characters in opposition to one another. When an author decides to create characters like Dr. Moreau and Inspector Javert, though, we are forced to admit that not everything is this way or that way; that not everything fits a preconceived mold; that everything is positively and truthfully indecisive. In The Island of Dr. Moreau and The Madman’s Daughter, the reader is confronted by Dr. Moreau’s questionable sanity. Is he really mad, and if so, who decides? To 19th century Britain, Dr. Moreau was a bloodthirsty madman, but what if he had lived at a different point in history, in a different society? Madness is so widespread, can be so many things, that to put one’s finger on it—to accurately define it—is nearly impossible. The reader’s second main consideration is that of the love triangle formed by Juliet and her two suitors, Edward and Montgomery. Here again Shepherd repeats the motif of choice, and brings it further into focus: Love is, in some sense, a kind of madness. If only because I’m currently reading Beowulf, I can’t help but think of the “hero’s journey”. A hero is someone who sacrifices herself, psychologically and physically, for a higher cause. The hero’s journey is made up of a departure, a fulfillment, and a return, all equally difficult to achieve. The adventure the hero is ready for is usually the one she will receive—just like Juliet, who knew that her father would end up resurfacing sooner or later. Yet, though she’s ready to face him, she doesn’t know that she’s ready. To comprehend this fully, she has to make her journey. Beowulf must face larger-than-life forces, such as Grendel and the dragon. Juliet must face the creatures on the island and the “monster” who is her father. Yet what happens within each of these characters—their transformation—is also part of what makes them heroes. In my opinion, the deed a hero must accomplish is twofold: first, she must save herself, and then, in doing so, she must save others. The quest must come from within because a hero must be bold enough to give herself up for another person. There must be a transformation within her consciousness—a revelation and a redemption—in order to make her deed heroic. Juliet is able to kill many internal monsters by venturing into unknown regions of her mind and soul, as well as her outer environment. But her story doesn’t end there; rather, it ends on a very mysterious note. She must continue her search for freedom and truth. The Madman’s Daughter seems to say that we, as humans, must listen closely to the spirit of humanity, the one burning within us—a universal truth that must be discovered by all. Good fantasy writing rings with these truths, which run parallel to our lives and teach us what might is universal to us all.
- Muse G., 15

Teen Review

The Madman’s Daughter

Megan Shepherd

Pub 1-2013, Balzer + Bray

Madness is defined as the state of being mentally disturbed, insane or demented — in other words, outside the norm. Yet most of us have, at least once in our lives, come close to the beauty and curiosity of madness. Like Juliet Moreau, The Madman’s Daughter’s enticing protagonist, we desire access to the delirious world of our subconscious — what lives within us but is so hard to reach from  the humdrum world of logic and morals. Throwing ourselves headlong  into the drone of everyday habits and schedules, we slowly become victims of conformity. Sometimes, we have to dream of breaking free from these unbearable chains, of doing the opposite of what is expected.

The Madman’s Daughter is Megan Shepherd’s first novel, so it’s understandable that she’d want to find her place in the world of young adult books. She does so incredibly well. The Madman’s Daughter uses its historical references to place it in parallel to modern-day society as well as bring into focus the very specific, and distinct, topic of science’s relationship to spirituality.

The Madman’s Daughter recounts the tale of The Island of Dr. Moreau by H.G.Wells through the eyes of Dr. Moreau’s sixteen-year-old daughter, Juliet Moreau. A presumed orphan who finds herself in the slums of 19th century London, Juliet has been the victim of a scandalous story about her father’s science experiments. Left without a job or money, she runs into a childhood friend named Montgomery who then leads her to her father’s island. Once on the island, she is torn between rejoicing at the long-awaited reunion with her father and recoiling at the gruesome truth of his scientific experiments. Juliet finds herself in a difficult situation wherein she has only just reunited with her family and must either decide to stay with her father or return to London, a victim once again. Love and hate, science and lust, survival and the spirit all define Juliet Moreau’s journey to the unconscious.

Overall, Sheperd’s tale is a delight to read. The reader is instantly captivated by the gloomy, curious character of Juliet, and her distress in the face of truth. Shepherd delves deep into Juliet’s mind to mine the source of her desperation. Of course, the “madman” himself is very fickle and shifty. Like Shylock in The Merchant of Venice, Inspector Javert in Les Miserables, or even Fagin in Oliver Twist, Dr. Moreau is a character that defies pigeonholing. These are, personally, my favorite characters: those who confound “good” and “bad”.

Readers want to place characters in opposition to one another. When an author decides to create characters like Dr. Moreau and Inspector Javert, though, we are forced to admit that not everything is this way or that way; that not everything fits a preconceived mold; that everything is positively and truthfully indecisive. In The Island of Dr. Moreau and The Madman’s Daughter, the reader is confronted by Dr. Moreau’s questionable sanity. Is he really mad, and if so, who decides? To 19th century Britain, Dr. Moreau was a bloodthirsty madman, but what if he had lived at a different point in history, in a different society? Madness is so widespread, can be so many things, that to put one’s finger on it—to accurately define it—is nearly impossible.

The reader’s second main consideration is that of the love triangle formed by Juliet and her two suitors, Edward and Montgomery. Here again Shepherd repeats the motif of choice, and brings it further into focus: Love is, in some sense, a kind of madness.

If only because I’m currently reading Beowulf, I can’t help but think of the “hero’s journey”. A hero is someone who sacrifices herself, psychologically and physically, for a higher cause. The hero’s journey is made up of a departure, a fulfillment, and a return, all equally difficult to achieve. The adventure the hero is ready for is usually the one she will receive—just like Juliet, who knew that her father would end up resurfacing sooner or later. Yet, though she’s ready to face him, she doesn’t know that she’s ready. To comprehend this fully, she has to make her journey.

Beowulf must face larger-than-life forces, such as Grendel and the dragon. Juliet must face the creatures on the island and the “monster” who is her father. Yet what happens within each of these characters—their transformation—is also part of what makes them heroes. In my opinion, the deed a hero must accomplish is twofold: first, she must save herself, and then, in doing so, she must save others. The quest must come from within because a hero must be bold enough to give herself up for another person. There must be a transformation within her consciousness—a revelation and a redemption—in order to make her deed heroic.

Juliet is able to kill many internal monsters by venturing into unknown regions of her mind and soul, as well as her outer environment. But her story doesn’t end there; rather, it ends on a very mysterious note. She must continue her search for freedom and truth. The Madman’s Daughter seems to say that we, as humans, must listen closely to the spirit of humanity, the one burning within us—a universal truth that must be discovered by all. Good fantasy writing rings with these truths, which run parallel to our lives and teach us what might is universal to us all.

- Muse G., 15

Teen Review
Prophecy
Ellen Oh
Pub 1-2013, Harper Teen
There has been a surge of young adult fantasy novels coming down the pipeline in the last few years: Graceling, Cinder, The Mortal Instruments series (to name only a few stories with supernatural elements).  First-time author Ellen Oh’s Prophecy is one of these: an original, supernatural, heart-stopping battle between good and evil. However, originality is one of the few things Prophecy has going for it. Inspired by ancient Asian history, Prophecy tells the story of Kira, a girl with extraordinary demon-slaying talents. Due to her skills and her unusual yellow eyes, she’s an outcast. When the country is attacked by demons, and an ancient prophecy comes to light, Kira sets to the road with Prince Taejo and other individuals on a quest to save their country. However, it turns out that the prophecy may not mean what they think, and when the characters discover its true meaning, it won’t just change Kira, but also the way the entire country views her. Most fantasy novels contain elements from old European legends–not Asian– and the way Oh employed several different fantastical creatures (including demons and dragons) kept the fantasy elements fresh and interesting. Unfortunately, the story’s originality wasn’t enough to make it great. I felt that several things were lacking, namely the book’s pace. Overall, it went much too fast, and by “fast”, I mean that things happened before I could really register how or why.  Two characters died towards the beginning of the novel, and a big deal was made out of their deaths, but they died before the reader has a chance to get to know them. Also, not a lot of reason was given for some of the events in the novel. Honestly, I was confused for much of the story. Several of the characters (and their relationships) also perplexed me. Kira’s relationship with Jaewon felt rushed. It didn’t feel believable. And as I mentioned before, when some, supposedly unlikable, characters died, they were painted as saints after they were gone. That didn’t sit well with me, either. I felt like the novel lacked consistency. All in all, Prophecy is a novel that had great potential, but didn’t quite fulfill it. Original though it is, its pacing and characters definitely hurt it overall. Given that this is Oh’s first book, I’m sure that she’s still trying to figure out her writing style, and from what I’ve read, this is the first novel in a trilogy. Maybe the following books will prove to be great. Otherwise, I can’t say I’ll stick around.
- Rachel P., 17

Teen Review

Prophecy

Ellen Oh

Pub 1-2013, Harper Teen

There has been a surge of young adult fantasy novels coming down the pipeline in the last few years: Graceling, Cinder, The Mortal Instruments series (to name only a few stories with supernatural elements).  First-time author Ellen Oh’s Prophecy is one of these: an original, supernatural, heart-stopping battle between good and evil. However, originality is one of the few things Prophecy has going for it.

Inspired by ancient Asian history, Prophecy tells the story of Kira, a girl with extraordinary demon-slaying talents. Due to her skills and her unusual yellow eyes, she’s an outcast. When the country is attacked by demons, and an ancient prophecy comes to light, Kira sets to the road with Prince Taejo and other individuals on a quest to save their country. However, it turns out that the prophecy may not mean what they think, and when the characters discover its true meaning, it won’t just change Kira, but also the way the entire country views her.

Most fantasy novels contain elements from old European legends–not Asian– and the way Oh employed several different fantastical creatures (including demons and dragons) kept the fantasy elements fresh and interesting. Unfortunately, the story’s originality wasn’t enough to make it great. I felt that several things were lacking, namely the book’s pace. Overall, it went much too fast, and by “fast”, I mean that things happened before I could really register how or why.  Two characters died towards the beginning of the novel, and a big deal was made out of their deaths, but they died before the reader has a chance to get to know them. Also, not a lot of reason was given for some of the events in the novel. Honestly, I was confused for much of the story.

Several of the characters (and their relationships) also perplexed me. Kira’s relationship with Jaewon felt rushed. It didn’t feel believable. And as I mentioned before, when some, supposedly unlikable, characters died, they were painted as saints after they were gone. That didn’t sit well with me, either. I felt like the novel lacked consistency.

All in all, Prophecy is a novel that had great potential, but didn’t quite fulfill it. Original though it is, its pacing and characters definitely hurt it overall. Given that this is Oh’s first book, I’m sure that she’s still trying to figure out her writing style, and from what I’ve read, this is the first novel in a trilogy. Maybe the following books will prove to be great. Otherwise, I can’t say I’ll stick around.

- Rachel P., 17

Teen Review
League of Strays
L. B. Schulman
Pub 10-2012, Amulet
Have you ever felt deceived, out of touch with reality, lost and outraged? Have you ever felt really ugly, embarrassed about being smart, scared of the future, yet guilty about the past? Have you hidden yourself while still not knowing yourself? Have you recalled good times, long forgotten days, laughing and ignoring the way things actually are? Truthfully speaking, these sentiments are inevitable at the fragile stage of life known as adolescence. At an age when everything is questioned and not many questions are answered, the feeling of emptiness is omnipresent; the search for identity blends with one’s struggle to keep up with the ever-changing world. L. B. Schulman’s novel League of Strays attempts to portray the crooked angles of this grotesque cosmos through her appealing characters. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen an author focus on this particular topic, which affects so many: Is vengeance the key to justice? As a debut novelist, Schulman seems to want to prove herself and affirm her place in the world of young adult literature. This topic being one that I am particularly interested in, I believe it right to speak first of the novel as a whole and then of its importance to current events and the reader.
When Charlotte Brody, a new 17-year-old student at Kennedy High, is secretly called into a meeting, she desires nothing more than a group of friends that will accept her. Instead, she encounters a miscellaneous trust composed of four participants: Nora Walker, an intellectual known for her excellent grades and few friends; Zoe Carpenter, an obstinate loner who’s frightening presence drives people away; Ritchie, a homosexual and alleged “drug dealer” whose kindness and innocence is venerated by the other members; and finally Kade Harlin, the charismatic, infamous, yet devious young leader of the group of ancient teenagers. Together they form the League of Strays, who are lost and afraid, but eager to find both friendship and revenge for those who have wrongfully judged and hurt them. Their main goal is to develop a stable but secret friendship, one able to stand up against everyone and everything.
With each new chapter, they get to know each other, and themselves, better. Some discover that their identities are shaped by what others force them to be. Between childhood and adulthood, they face love, truth, self, and their environment, and in the process, are torn between exacting revenge and abiding by their consciences. At first, vengeance seems adequate and justified, because they think it right for their tormentors to experience the same hostility they have. Yet, as their acts of defiance grow more radical, from vandalizing school property to starting fights between other students, Charlotte begins to doubt the motivation for these acts. Torn between her love for Kade and her fear of deceiving him, she is also confronted by her own dreams, unsure if they are her parents’ or her own. This is a turning point for Charlotte — she is forced to choose between her faithfulness to the League or her own ability to make choices, but what this final decision will be is up to you to uncover.
I found this novel to be, in general, slightly disappointing. Its theme was promising, but I didn’t like the way Schulman wrote in a monotone and continuous drawl. The character arcs were too structured. Personally, I enjoy books more when they have no discernable beginning, middle or end. I feel, otherwise, that a book is too orderly, too focused on arguing a moral. A novel that simply tells a story in an original, unique way — one that doesn’t fit a certain mold — is more engaging, more attractive to young adult readers. Teenagers prefer novels to be disheveled and chaotic, much like themselves. To make a connection between reader, and character, and plot, League of Strays felt like a parent droning on and on about what is good and what is bad, which isn’t so enticing to me because I experience this every day at school, home and society as a whole. Adolescents just want something to relate to, something tangible to the mind and soul, and something that textually affects our ever-changing personas. Schulman’s novel is effective in the way that it represents, clearly, teenage stereotypes (like the Breakfast Club did thirty years ago). But maybe some of us are tired of those stereotypes. The majority of us are undefinable and fit into absolutely no mold. And this is what we are; creatures in constant transformation.
Schulman focused more on delivering a moral than on describing the truth. Because sincerely, not many of us are able to distinguish what is “good” and what is “bad” or “unacceptable.” She makes it seem as if these tormentors didn’t really deserve the vengeance delivered by the League, but what is a teenager supposed to do when this constant, repetitive harm is both physical and mental, and when there remains no other recourse but revenge? Schulman declares that, “We have to show him that he can’t mess with me,” but I disagree with her portrayal of Kade — the supposed “bad guy” — as the sole cause of trouble at Kennedy High. The real source of trouble is the school’s administration: the principals and teachers, the practitioners of discrimination that is constant and never-ending. They choose to be blind. In reality, Kade is responsible for opening the school’s eyes to the truth, the one everyone has ignored for far too long: that of this perpetual harrasment and intimidation based on the fact that an individual is different and does not conform to the norm.
On the other hand, I do appreciate Schulman’s attempt to bring awareness to the kind of oppression so many adolescents suffer. Bullying victims are between 2 and 9 times more likely to commit suicide than non-bullying victims, and suicide is the third leading cause of death among teenagers, resulting in about 4,400 deaths per year. Schulman’s book asks us what we would do in a similar position. Would we give in to the urge to seek revenge? It’s a human, natural instinct. Though Kade appears, at the novel’s close, to be a kind of sociopath, his mental torture is proof of his innocence, and of his desire for justice. His vengeance is a cry for help; a burning within him that many of us can identify with. But Schulman makes the other characters blind. They turn away from him. Personally, I think it warrants further discussion.   In short, instead of breaking the society’s molds, Schulman anticipated them, enlarged them, and approved them. Even her characters — supposed misfits of the teenage hierarchy — force themselves to succumb to adulthood, and the principals that dictate what is good or bad in the world, as well as its perpetual drone. Instead of promoting free-thinking, Schulman implies that following the “rules” is the best way to resolve conflict. She acts as a moralist instead of speaking out against a serious problem. Consequently, League of Strays had potential, but failed to meet it, weighted down by preconceived narrow-minded morals.
- Muse G., 15

Teen Review

League of Strays

L. B. Schulman

Pub 10-2012, Amulet

Have you ever felt deceived, out of touch with reality, lost and outraged? Have you ever felt really ugly, embarrassed about being smart, scared of the future, yet guilty about the past? Have you hidden yourself while still not knowing yourself? Have you recalled good times, long forgotten days, laughing and ignoring the way things actually are? Truthfully speaking, these sentiments are inevitable at the fragile stage of life known as adolescence. At an age when everything is questioned and not many questions are answered, the feeling of emptiness is omnipresent; the search for identity blends with one’s struggle to keep up with the ever-changing world. L. B. Schulman’s novel League of Strays attempts to portray the crooked angles of this grotesque cosmos through her appealing characters. It’s been a long time since I’ve seen an author focus on this particular topic, which affects so many: Is vengeance the key to justice? As a debut novelist, Schulman seems to want to prove herself and affirm her place in the world of young adult literature. This topic being one that I am particularly interested in, I believe it right to speak first of the novel as a whole and then of its importance to current events and the reader.

When Charlotte Brody, a new 17-year-old student at Kennedy High, is secretly called into a meeting, she desires nothing more than a group of friends that will accept her. Instead, she encounters a miscellaneous trust composed of four participants: Nora Walker, an intellectual known for her excellent grades and few friends; Zoe Carpenter, an obstinate loner who’s frightening presence drives people away; Ritchie, a homosexual and alleged “drug dealer” whose kindness and innocence is venerated by the other members; and finally Kade Harlin, the charismatic, infamous, yet devious young leader of the group of ancient teenagers. Together they form the League of Strays, who are lost and afraid, but eager to find both friendship and revenge for those who have wrongfully judged and hurt them. Their main goal is to develop a stable but secret friendship, one able to stand up against everyone and everything.

With each new chapter, they get to know each other, and themselves, better. Some discover that their identities are shaped by what others force them to be. Between childhood and adulthood, they face love, truth, self, and their environment, and in the process, are torn between exacting revenge and abiding by their consciences. At first, vengeance seems adequate and justified, because they think it right for their tormentors to experience the same hostility they have. Yet, as their acts of defiance grow more radical, from vandalizing school property to starting fights between other students, Charlotte begins to doubt the motivation for these acts. Torn between her love for Kade and her fear of deceiving him, she is also confronted by her own dreams, unsure if they are her parents’ or her own. This is a turning point for Charlotte — she is forced to choose between her faithfulness to the League or her own ability to make choices, but what this final decision will be is up to you to uncover.

I found this novel to be, in general, slightly disappointing. Its theme was promising, but I didn’t like the way Schulman wrote in a monotone and continuous drawl. The character arcs were too structured. Personally, I enjoy books more when they have no discernable beginning, middle or end. I feel, otherwise, that a book is too orderly, too focused on arguing a moral. A novel that simply tells a story in an original, unique way — one that doesn’t fit a certain mold — is more engaging, more attractive to young adult readers. Teenagers prefer novels to be disheveled and chaotic, much like themselves. To make a connection between reader, and character, and plot, League of Strays felt like a parent droning on and on about what is good and what is bad, which isn’t so enticing to me because I experience this every day at school, home and society as a whole. Adolescents just want something to relate to, something tangible to the mind and soul, and something that textually affects our ever-changing personas. Schulman’s novel is effective in the way that it represents, clearly, teenage stereotypes (like the Breakfast Club did thirty years ago). But maybe some of us are tired of those stereotypes. The majority of us are undefinable and fit into absolutely no mold. And this is what we are; creatures in constant transformation.

Schulman focused more on delivering a moral than on describing the truth. Because sincerely, not many of us are able to distinguish what is “good” and what is “bad” or “unacceptable.” She makes it seem as if these tormentors didn’t really deserve the vengeance delivered by the League, but what is a teenager supposed to do when this constant, repetitive harm is both physical and mental, and when there remains no other recourse but revenge? Schulman declares that, “We have to show him that he can’t mess with me,” but I disagree with her portrayal of Kade — the supposed “bad guy” — as the sole cause of trouble at Kennedy High. The real source of trouble is the school’s administration: the principals and teachers, the practitioners of discrimination that is constant and never-ending. They choose to be blind. In reality, Kade is responsible for opening the school’s eyes to the truth, the one everyone has ignored for far too long: that of this perpetual harrasment and intimidation based on the fact that an individual is different and does not conform to the norm.

On the other hand, I do appreciate Schulman’s attempt to bring awareness to the kind of oppression so many adolescents suffer. Bullying victims are between 2 and 9 times more likely to commit suicide than non-bullying victims, and suicide is the third leading cause of death among teenagers, resulting in about 4,400 deaths per year. Schulman’s book asks us what we would do in a similar position. Would we give in to the urge to seek revenge? It’s a human, natural instinct. Though Kade appears, at the novel’s close, to be a kind of sociopath, his mental torture is proof of his innocence, and of his desire for justice. His vengeance is a cry for help; a burning within him that many of us can identify with. But Schulman makes the other characters blind. They turn away from him. Personally, I think it warrants further discussion.   
In short, instead of breaking the society’s molds, Schulman anticipated them, enlarged them, and approved them. Even her characters — supposed misfits of the teenage hierarchy — force themselves to succumb to adulthood, and the principals that dictate what is good or bad in the world, as well as its perpetual drone. Instead of promoting free-thinking, Schulman implies that following the “rules” is the best way to resolve conflict. She acts as a moralist instead of speaking out against a serious problem. Consequently, League of Strays had potential, but failed to meet it, weighted down by preconceived narrow-minded morals.

- Muse G., 15

Teen Review
Pulse
Patrick Carman
Pub 2-2013, Katherine Tegen Books
Pulse, by Patrick Carman, is the first book in many to come. It has no zombie invasions or corrupt insane dictators or apocalyptic ruin but somehow it succeeds. This immersive read will have you hooked and waiting for the next installment.
With water levels rising and imminent doom looming on the horizon, humanity’s brightest head for a secure location to ponder how they can possibly survive while the rest of their kind is racked by natural disasters. After a few years, they decide to save humanity by having people live in special states (one or two for each continent) surrounded by force fields. Most go willingly, but some stay on the outside. One of these outsiders is Faith. She is torn between staying outside and living in a state when all of a sudden, she finds out she has a “pulse” that allows her to move things with her mind, effectively making her a telekinetic.
 The characters in Pulse draw the reader in immediately, and are so realistically drawn, they could actually be real teenagers. This makes them easily relatable. Personally, I like the futuristic technology Carman describes, like the tablets, issued to all citizens, that become extensions of them. There is also no traditional money, only virtual coins that the characters can use to buy things.
I am dying for the next book in the Pulse series to come out because this one is a cliffhanger. The only problem with it is that, at some points, the plot starts to fall off, but it immediately picks up again. If Carman had kept the book consistent, it would have been better. Nonetheless, I would definitely recommend this book.
- Namazzi C., 13

Teen Review

Pulse

Patrick Carman

Pub 2-2013, Katherine Tegen Books

Pulse, by Patrick Carman, is the first book in many to come. It has no zombie invasions or corrupt insane dictators or apocalyptic ruin but somehow it succeeds. This immersive read will have you hooked and waiting for the next installment.

With water levels rising and imminent doom looming on the horizon, humanity’s brightest head for a secure location to ponder how they can possibly survive while the rest of their kind is racked by natural disasters. After a few years, they decide to save humanity by having people live in special states (one or two for each continent) surrounded by force fields. Most go willingly, but some stay on the outside. One of these outsiders is Faith. She is torn between staying outside and living in a state when all of a sudden, she finds out she has a “pulse” that allows her to move things with her mind, effectively making her a telekinetic.

The characters in Pulse draw the reader in immediately, and are so realistically drawn, they could actually be real teenagers. This makes them easily relatable. Personally, I like the futuristic technology Carman describes, like the tablets, issued to all citizens, that become extensions of them. There is also no traditional money, only virtual coins that the characters can use to buy things.

I am dying for the next book in the Pulse series to come out because this one is a cliffhanger. The only problem with it is that, at some points, the plot starts to fall off, but it immediately picks up again. If Carman had kept the book consistent, it would have been better. Nonetheless, I would definitely recommend this book.

- Namazzi C., 13